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Old 12-08-2012, 09:07 PM   #1
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Hey everyone. I'm usually more into writing stories, but I write a little poetry. They're not very good, but I like them. These are old-ish, but I migrated them from another site. Hope people here enjoy them. :>

Who I Used to be
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I'm gonna miss this,
The words we used to speak.
But we all know very well,
You're only the company you keep.

Memories return like flash flood.
A million tingles of passion.
But like all new trends,
It was just the current fashion.

My heart races as I hit each key.
Short on what's left to do.
Maybe I'll be strong enough to move on,
Maybe start off somewhere new.

Snowflakes melt,
Relationships end.
The fire burned,
The ashes, I send.

Look on back,
Think of me.
But all you'll see,
Is who I used to be.


Weak
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The words that have been brewing,
They're about to boil over.
But, I can't tell you just yet.
I'll tell you when you're sober.

Apologies laced with lies,
Don't hold me at night.
Drowning in my tears,
I can barely see the light.

The blanket wraps around me,
Encasing me in warmth.
But, that is patchy,
When everything around me is torn.

You're selfish,
A liar,
Naive,
And it's getting down to the wire..

I know what's good for me,
But I never see it through.
I just don't yet have the strength,
To get away from you.


Serenity
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You surround me like twirling leaves,
Falling to the ground.
Cool breeze glides pass my skin,
But only when you're around.

Navigating through fields of cotton,
Soft to the touch.
As they brush against my arms,
I just can't get enough.

Laying in a field,
You stare past my flaws.
I feel like I've been found,
Your long-lost cause.

The windmill turns at a patient rate,
Calm like your gaze.
You slide your hand across my face,
Leaving me without a phrase.

On our lush land,
There's nowhere to hide.
And when you're away,
I lock it away inside.

Until the next time we visit,
I remember the serene grace.
Though, I'm eager to return,
Slow and steady wins the race.


Disaster (One of my first poems; very old.)
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Just as we reunite
We get lost in the night
When we meet again
The worst dangers impend

Our fingers touch, the boat in motion
But the waters rage, we are separated in the ocean
We embrace in the street, trying again
But the streets separate in an earthquake, leaving us alone again in the end

We kiss at home, hiding under the sheet
But the world is on fire, and we burn in the heat
Dancing in the sky, we hope to escape all bad things around us
But we get lost in eachother's eyes, and eventually by the strong wind's gust

You heal my suffering soul
But your memory is lost in a black hole
Forever and always seemed so easy
But no matter how much I try, I'm left feeling queasy

Just when we think we can't take anymore
Disaster strikes, leaving our hearts poor
The thought of you still lingers
But even in thought, you still slip through my fingers


The Cold
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Sitting here alone,
I think of you.
Remembering things,
We used to do.

Tears fall like rain,
Flooding my bed.
But even my sadness,
You can't comprehend.

Now that you're gone,
I'm feeling the cold.
The emotions that pour,
Are starting to get old.

Snow consumes my body,
Freezing me to the bone.
My tears are like crystals,
Who call depression their home.

My heart beats,
At the speed of light.
Scared to move on,
Consumed by the fright.

I know you didn't need to,
These things happen.
But I can't help but feel,
Just a little entrapment.

You tugged at my heart strings,
And I tugged at yours.
But product minus you,
Is me wanting more.

I wish you could hear,
The messages from my heart.
But since you can't,
I won't even start.


Seasons
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Winter begins, as do we.
Ponds are already frozen.
If it's not already clear,
You're the one I've chosen.


Though we have our differences,
I am in love with you.
We can work out anything,
That much is already true.


Flowers bloom beautifully in Spring,
Simultaneously with us.
Very small inconveniences,
Can be left behind in the dust.


Our differences are more obvious now,
But our love is just too strong.
Nothing we could ever do,
Will remotely resemble wrong.


Summer heat always breaks a sweat,
And it's taking over me.
How our future will go,
We'll just have to see.


Our differences are breaking through,
But we can fight them away.
But there are still so many things,
I have yet to say.


In Fall, teardrops fall like the leaves,
Swirling in the wind.
A love that used to be so great,
Seems like childish pretend.


The differences between us,
They're just too much to bear.
The rift between us now,
Is too damaged to repair.


Transparent
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I see though you,Because you're transparent.
I was drunk off your love,
So much that I was incoherent.


So I'm gonna go now,
And salvage my being
You played me for too long.
I wasn't the only person you were seeing.


Some people get depressed,
Some people get mad.
But in this particular situation,
I'm actually quite glad.


I have new freedom,
You're short one love.
I'm released from this cage,
Flying high like a dove.


Strobe lights beam across your face,
Flickering in the dark.
Slowly but surely lettering out,
And I'm ready to make my mark.


This happened to me before,
I should be ready.
But since I don't have a speech prepared,
I won't risk looking petty.
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Old 12-09-2012, 08:27 AM   #2
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Wow there really beautiful. And i read every single one. :P
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I like, although some of them didn't seem to flow when I mouthed them. Other than that, the emotion conveyed is fantastic.
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Yeah I've been working on that. Thanks both of you! :>
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That's fine. That is what you and everyone else calls me on FC, haha. Thank you!
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