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Old 08-26-2009, 12:04 AM   #1
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KR's Story: Cornerian Wars

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Cornerian Wars History:



Directly following the defeat of the Anglars, General Peppy Hare, leader of the Cornerian Empire, died of old age. This was a sad day for the people of Lylat, as he had not only been a good leader of the Cornerian Armed Forces, but he had been a good old leader for the entire system. A new leader by the name of Jaden Torres took control of the Empire. At first he was good to the people, but slowly he began to rule more and more by the military, and the people of Lylat began to complain. As Torres' grip on the system tightened, small sects of rebellion began to rise up, though none reaching any size which couldn’t be controlled by the ever more evil Empire.

The Cornerian Empire soon became a military dictatorship, and the ever more populated planet of Venom requested that it be considered its own entity, separate of the Empire. Torres was angered by this request, and he denied it while simultaneously deploying troops to its surface. Poverty was growing, people were starving, and Corneria began to fall into disarray. Buildings weren’t kept up, for no one could afford to do so anymore. People were shot on sight for the smallest of crimes, though most of the time this was stealing, because it had become almost required if one was to live.

Then it happened.

In an all-out display of force, a group of rebels rose up, the largest group yet. Jaden Torres was assassinated in an attack on his high-end home in the heart of Corneria City, and much of the Cornerian Guard fell as well. The leader of this group was a young fox, known only as “Blood Claw.” It was of course an alias, and to this day no one knows what his true identity was, but it is speculated that he could have descendants in the modern day rebel ranks…

The people were happy, of course. Their corrupt leader had been killed, and the almost equally corrupt Guard was now in submission because of these rebels. The remainder of the Cornerian Forces, the regular Cornerian Army, wanted to rebuild to government to resemble what it had been under General Pepper’s leadership. Pepper’s had been the greatest term in the history of Lylat, and it would obviously be in everyone’s best interests if things went back to the way they were during that time.

But the rebels didn’t trust the Cornerian Army. They feared that if they were allowed to control the Empire again, things would only grow back to a Torres-like regime. So they refused to give control back to the Cornerian Army.

This angered the CA, of course, and after unsuccessful negotiations with the rebels, they attempted to take back the crucial city of Corneria City forcefully. Things went well at first, and the rebels were forced pretty well out of the city. However, after a very short period of time, the rebels returned and counterattacked. Corneria City was in utter chaos. The fighting destroyed the city, and soon the fighting broke out into the rest of Lylat, especially as the rebels grew in number.

The conflict continued for years upon years, the fighting never stopping. Countless people were giving up their lives for their respective sides. The NCF had allied itself with the likes of the Aquas Underground, led by Redshire Nought, and the Barkule Clan of Titania, while the Rebellion had on its side Kruger Lombardi’s Space Hot Rodders. The conflict was constantly on the rise, until something occurred that made everyone in Lylat stop dead in their tracks.

There was an attack in Aquas City upon Marcel Crow and Redshire Nought of the Aquas Underground. With them was Commander Michael Grey. Normally this attack wouldn’t be considered anything special, but this one was indeed different: It was a nuclear attack. The strike was planned for the rebel headquarters on Aquas, and while the war between the NCF and Rebellion was still raging, the three there contacted Lieutenant Colonel Horus Chike of the rebels to assist. The impending threat was taken care of without too much trouble, but it open the eyes of Lylat to a new terrorist faction, allegedly calling themselves “Apostasy.”

Negotiations were immediately opened between all factions, and a ceasefire was reached. The New Cornerian Forces and the Rebellion promised the Aquas Underground that they would help in the cleansing of Zoness’s oceans, and in return the Underground pledged that they would help in the fight against Apostasy. They also asked that Aquas be left alone, and that the rebels not try to govern it once the conflict with Apostasy was resolved.

The Barkule Clan of Titania decided to allow the rebels to continue to maintain a base of operations out of their desert planet, and the rebels promised to pull out as soon as it was all over.

The Space Hot Rodders withdrew their allegiance to the Rebellion, though they did promise that they would refrain from raiding any supply convoys other than those of Apostasy. In return, they were allowed by the other factions to keep any loot that they gained from such raids.

The newly formed Alliance, while many of its members are left unhappy with being forced to work with people who were once their enemies, aspires to defeat the threat that Apostasy represents once and for all.

Perhaps then Lylat can rest in a long awaited peace



Characters:

Name: Hadza (Hahd-zae) McCloud
Age: 18
Species:Blue Fox
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Corneria

Vehicles: A beat up Arwing. it looks basically like the old arwings, with a few scratches and dents but it still runs well. he modified the lasers on it, they now fire faster then normal and the lasers travel faster then normal, he has fixed the engine to run at light speed again and to allow for more agility acceleration and defenses. his laser are heat seekers(also a modification). he has inserted a laser set changer. it is capable of switching from standard lasers, to power lasers, to heat seeker lasers, to warning lasers(dont do damage) in a split second. he also has a bomb shooter that fires in virtually every angle. it is equipt with a boost thruster that can last until the engine overheats. he has gotten used to the maximum length of time to use by flying in it over these past 2 years. pilot compacity is one pilot. he has inserted the higheset HUD technology(he is very handy with technology) and the best sound system around. it still has the old G-diffuser in it but because of his other modifications it has the same speed as a modern Arwing. he has also added an extra booster to the back facing down allowing a vertical take off. He calls his Arwing The Rave

he also has a lesser version of a landmaster. it cant hover, or do barrelroles or anything like that. it fires power lasers and standard lasers. it is alot lighter and faster then the landmaster and its mobility is better. it's main color is a dark green with blue counter-weight flaps. it has boost thrusters, that can last for a max of 10 seconds but is very effective in close combat

he uses the insignia of the Great Fox, he wears it proudly as it is his heritage. it replaces the old Conerian Army insignia that was on there

Side in the War (Who your character was with before the merge, if applicable - most characters are now Alliance members.): he is with the rebels but he is on his way to join the NCF

Appearance (be as descriptive as you can): Blue with a white face and snout. He wears a green jacket with the Great Fox insignia on it with a red T-shirt on under it, and Black pants is what he chooses to wear. he also wears black boots. he is average height for a fox in these days. He has White eyes and a white tipped tail. he also has a deflector shield on his belt(as seen in the Super Smash Bros Brawl Subspace Emmersy For Fox). his stare will startle you. if you stare back at him it will give you nightmares. his fangs are white as clouds but as deadly as a beam sword, but he does NOT use them as weapons. the white eyes stare right into your soul. he is slim but his muscle are toned but not over bulky. his hair on his head is kinda shaggy, with white strips. his jacket is made of cotton and his boots leather. his ears have white spots on them and the inside fur is white. he has a scar across his right eye going from the top left of it to the bottom right, but his eye isnt damaged, which makes his stare even more deadly. his eyes glow with just a small black dot in the middle.

Personality: he is very gentle, but if you do something to something he loves he will crush you. he is quiet and only speaks to you alone until he gets to know you. he is very determined and has to finish anything that he starts. he doesnt trust easy, but he can trust. he also loves Classic Rock music and Classic Metal. he is unsure on his rebel position though. he is hero hearted which gives that urge to join the NCF. one of his many loves is to go out in his arwing and practice very complex air moves, he also uses them in battle. he loves to have fun apparently by the way he flies.

Background/History: his parents were both foxes, farther was red with some spots that were blue with blue eyes and his mom was white with green eyes. When he was born his parents were surprised to find him to be blue. When he was a toddler he used to scare his parents with his white eyes. He had an older sister named Rayna, who was Red with Green eyes. She was considered one of the most beautiful foxes in the area. She was 16 when Hadza was born. Fortunately Hadza was born to a rich family

He was always criticized as a kid for being blue. But as he grew up the others started to respect him as they learned of another blue fox...Krystal. As they grew and studied their History they found out that the Starfox team was perhaps the greatest group of people ever. During his time in school an older wolf, Stagra, always bullied him. Later only a few month's before Hadza's capture he beat Stagra for threatning his Sister. Stagra never messed with him again.

When he was only 14 the rebels invaded his apartement and killed his family and seized him. They took him back to there headquarters where Hadza made his last attempt to escape. He waited 'til nightfall to make a run for an Arwing and he was captured on the way. He was put in a jail cell, but only for a short time, for only a week or so. When he got out they put him through some tests and training and learned what he was capable of when he was put in an Arwing.

The arwing he has now was given to him by the rebels because that was the only running one they had at the time. They offered him a better one a few weeks later and he flew it just to give it back and has continued to fly in the first one. Just recently he found out he is a descendant of Krystal and Fox, but it has been so long that no one even cares that he is their descendant. He Flew on the rebels’ side for a time with a passion that isn’t seen in most warriors, he fights even better on foot with a staff he made himself that resembles Krystal's. He has no wingmate, he will only fly alongside someone during a battle.

He was fighting in a small, dog fight, not much of a challenge for him and the pilots that were fighting to. After the battle he called over the intercoms and said “Hey guys. I think I’m gonna hang back for a few minutes.” He never returned to the rebels HQ, instead he headed for Kantina and the NCF HQ where he joined, of course, the standard loyalty test. They allowed him to keep his arwing as long as he changed some things on it. That is when all the paint and decals came in. but because he loved fighting on the surface just as much the NCF gave him his lesser landmaster which he simply calls “The Landmaster”

Likes: food, working out to stay fit for battle, girls but doesnt trust enough to get married(he is trying to change that), and listening to music

Dislikes: the new empire, the very rare starwolf supporter(even though they have disapated greatly to almost non-existent, but when he was younger he learned to hate them because Stagra was a supporter) some of the leaders of the rebels. (mainly Franside, his trainer.) and the Apostacy

Possessions: A ancient braclet for some primitive planet that no longer exist passed down through his family, it is his most prized possession. a simple blaster pistol, a staff he made himself that looks similar to Krystal's legendary staff but isnt nearly as powerful, and the Deflector mentioned above

Money: he has saved up about 4000CR

Aspirations/Dreams: after finding out about his heritage he wants to avenge Fox and Krystal and the rest of the Starfox team by defeating the Apostacy as he thinks team Starfox would do.
he also would like to start another group that resembles the Starfox team, or at least join one.


Name: Sage
Age: 19
Species: Red Fox
Gender: Female
Home Planet: Considered Kantina but she was born on the Space Station.
Side in War: New Cornerian Forces(NCF)

History: Sage was Born on the New Cornerian Forces Space Station over Kantina right after the war between the Rebels and Cornerian Army started. Her dad wasnt very high in the rankings on the space station. Her mom died in battle during the war not long after Sage's birth. She was brilliant as a kid! she learned fast and was favored over the other kids in training to someday be working on the space station. she is one of the few foxes on board the space station. She is now 19 and working hard to move up in ranks with hopes to someday either be a fighter or leader of the space station. she is now only an Overviewer of certain factions of the station. which is where she is now. she is nice but determined, she has a strong will and knows how to fly an Arwing, but she is best at flying hers! she got it when she was about 14. Her dad had it painted green and what is normally blue on an Arwing is blue on hers. she uses the insignia of tthe NCF. she calls her Arwing "Flying Fox"

She is a vivid red with beautiful purple eyes. she is about 5' 7"(Hadza is about 6' 0") her paws and belly are white and her snout is white.


Name: Szary Razor
Age: 30
Species: Midnight Cat(Black)
Gender: Male
Home Planet: he was born on the only above water colony on Aquas.
Side in War: NCF

History: He was born on Aquas. he lived there for most of his life. he lived a pretty normal life during his childhood. He went to school, got a job, etc. until the war started he was fine. at the start of the war his father was drafted into the Cornerian Army(against his will, at the time his dad supported the rebels). His dad died in Battle when he was 18. his mom had died just a year earlier at child birth of Szary's sister, Kadi. Kadi still lives on Aquas, even after the Nuclear attack. Szary raised his sister after his dad died until his grandparents got to aquas then he went to join the NCF because he wanted to avenge his dad's death.

Looks: He is a Midnight Cat, named for their all Black fur and White eyes. he is about 5' 10" and.



Chapter 1: takes place at Kantina in the HQ

"Thanks for the landmaster guys!" said Hadza
"No problem it's the least we could do after the info you gave us about the rebels" said his new overviewer, Sage.
"Wow Sage is....is beautiful...." thought Hadza.
Sage was a vivid, red fox with with purple eyes. she was slightly shorter then Hadza and was skinny.
"It's my pleasure." said Hadza as he bowed slightly. "do you mind if i take it for a spin?" asked Hadza.
"Not at all." said Sage, "get the Great fox ready to take Hadza's landmaster to the surface"
"Yes ma'am." said one of the workers under Sage.
Hadza heads towards his room
the Great fox? can this be? another version or the accual one? thought Hadza.

about an hour later: Hadza gets a call from Sage

"Hey Hadza, your trip to the surface is ready and your landmaster is ready." said Sage, "we are going to drop you on the training field, feel free to use your ammo we will have a reload waiting for you when you get back"
"Ok, thanks." said Hadza, "I'll be there in a minute."
"Copy that." Said Sage.
Hadza arrives at the docking station, which is where the Great Fox and Hadza's trip to the surface was.
"So THIS is the the docking station" thought Hadza, "they couldnt have done a better job then this? this place is hideous!"
"Ahh, you have arrived, Hadza. Welcome to the Docking Station." Said Sage, "I know it's not much to look at, but it does it's job."
"Well i have seen worst then this on Coneria itself." Said Hadza with a bit of optimism in his voice.
"Well the Great Fox is right through that door, i have some work to do. The Attendant will get you ready. I hope to meet you again Hadza." Said Sage.
"And the same to you." Said Hadza.
While walking towards the Great Fox, Hadza is startled by a loud Squill of the intercom system.
"Ahh, What was that?" Said Hadza to himself.
"Sorry Mister McCloud" Said the Attendant over the Intercom system.
"uhhh...What?" Said Hadza.
"I'm Frand, the Docking Attendant. I love reading about your grandfather, Fox McCloud!" Said Frand.
"How did you kn...?" Said Hadza.
"I know alot about his heirs! i know of you and your Sister. Oh! I'm sorry about what happened to her." Interrupted Frand.
Well, I'm ready to go, Frand. just tell me what to do and im out of here." Said Hadza
"Ok, the pilot is in there, he will assist you on your training mission on the surface." Said Frand
"Ok, thanks Frand." Said Hadza.


the Next Chapter takes place on the surface.





Chapter 2: The Great Fox lands on the Surface and lets Hadza and his landmaster out along with Caiptain Szary, a white, male cat.

"Ok Szary, you ready to do some fighting?" Asked Hadza while cranking up his rock music.
"Hold on there just a secong Hadza" Said Szary, "You need to know the basic controls to your landmster."
"Ok, fine" Said Hadza.
"The handle on your left goes back and forth to control your throttle. Push it fowards to go...well..fowards, haha, and backwards to go backwards and to slow down. It's Pretty self explainitory." Said Szary.
"I can figure out the rest, lets go." Said Hadza.
"Whatever you say, Hadza" Said Szary.
they speed of into the distance with Hadza's music playing
"Ok, Hadza, this is the main training ground. there are some old toned down Aparoids for you to train on and a few targets that look like the Apostacy's Ships." Said Szary, "Now your first mission is to kill all the Aparoids i send at you. then a couple of other missions and we will go back."
"Sounds good. lets do this!" Said Hadza.
Szary pushes a yellow button in his cockpit that switches on the Aparoids. Hadza sees them coming and cranks up the music really loud
Hadza storms in as soon as they get in firing range.
"Where's the laser trigger?!" asked Hadza.
"Find it, it's all part of your training" Said Szary.
Hadza screaches to a stop! With the Aparoids coming at him, he has to search frantically. he flips a red flap on the right side of the cockpit. there is a red button under it with a "B" on it.
"Maybe this is Bombs?" Said Hadza to himself.
Hadza pushes the button, hears a click and nothing happens.
"Hadza, your landmaster is not equiped with a bomb shooter." Said Szary.
"Well that sucks..." Said Hadza.
Hadza keeps looking until he sees a black button on the side of the throttle. he pushes it and it fires green lasers
"Alright found it!" Said Hadza, "Now it's time to kick some Aparoid tail!"
Hadza lays down on the throttle thrusting his landmaster fowards. he starts firing in the direction of the Aparoids but his shots keep going over them.
"Dang, how do i aim?" Thought Hadza, "Maybe it's this Joy Stick."
he moves the joystick and it stears the landmaster as well as aims.
"Well isnt that nice, two things that steer this thing." Thought Hadza.
"Ahh, Hadza. It seems you have found everthing you need. good job!" Said Szary.
"Thanks, but now i got to kill some Aparoid." Said Hadza.
Hadza started to aim at the first one. He gets him on target and blows it to pieces. Now he is right up on the Aparoids. one lunges at him and he dodges it and whips the landmaster around. He takes aim at another and fires at it. the Aparoid roles over to dodge the shot.
"Ok, that wasnt a toned down move." Thought Hadza.
but he continues to fire at it until he hits it. There are 3 left. The Aparoids are standing in a row in front of Hadza. When a Ship with the Apostacy insignia on it flys right over the ridge on the east side of the training ground, opposite to where the Great Fox is.
"It's just a little Apostacy fighter" Said Szary, "Let him land and we can take care of them."
"Ok, I was hoping for a better fight then those Aparoids." Said Hadza.
the Apostacy ship shoots the Aparoids and lands in their spot. Szary pulls up beside Hadza's landmaster.
"So...are we not gonna destroy the fighter thats droping off those builders?" Asked Hadza.
"Be Patient. once they start to take off, the inside of the ship will be visible for a split second" Said Szary, "These landmaster aren't equiped with anit-aircraft lasers, they wouldn't do much against this."
"Ok. Now where is the open part?"
"It's gonna be close the the back where the landing stand is, they are on both sides but we only need to hit one."
"Ok, i will aim there."
The Apostacy Ship gets all the builders off and takes off.
"OK! NOW!" Shouts Szary.
they both start firing in the general area where Szary mentioned. Hadza firing at the the right and Szary at the left.
"It's hit." Said Szary, "It's coming down!"
The ship hits the ground and blows up on top of the builders.
"Why didnt they fight back?" Asked Hadza.
"Because that fighter only has cutting lasers. All our vehicles have shields that block those." Answered Szary.
"Why did it drop off builders?" Asked Hadza.
"Good Question. lets head back to the HQ and tell what we saw." Answered Szary.
they head back to the Great Fox and fly back to the HQ.
Once back at HQ, Szary radioes Sage and tells her about what they saw.
"Sage, on the training field, me and Hadza saw an Apostacy Builder-fighter." Said Szary into the Radio.
"Copy that, there is a whole lot of them on there way here. Please come here. We are in the Battle Tactic Room. Bring Hadza." Said Sage.
they arrive in the Battle Tactic room.
"Whoa this place is nice! especially compared to the Docking Station!" Thought Hadza.
"Ok, here is Kantina" Said Sage pointing to the hologram table of the nearby space, "Here is the Apostacy on its way. We are gonna try to drive them back to here, Zoness. Now i must warn you. Does everyone understand?"
"Aye" Says everyone.
Hadza leans over towards Szary and asks, "Where is the Space station we are one?"
"It's right here." Said Szary quitely to Hadza pointing at it on the hologram table.
the station shakes and rumbles.
"Ok!" Said Sage, "I just got a call that there are a few fighters out there attacking the station. Your fighters are ready. now go! Except for you Hadza."
"Yes Ma'am?" Said Hadza.
"Your fighter will be in Hanger #9. It's a brand new, standard Arwing." Said Sage.
"Umm...Sage i want to fly in my Arwing." Said Hadza.
"Really?!" Asked Sage, "You want to fly that one instead of our brand new one?"
"Yes, i have added a few modifications to mine that fit me perfectly." Answered Hadza.
"Ok, you can fly yours." Said Sage, "Follow Szary to your ship. He will be your wingmate for this battle, and, depending on how you two fight with each other, you may become permanent wingmates."
"Ok, I usually fly alone, but....it would be a pleasure to fly with Szary." Said Hadza.
"Oh! and Hadza. Be Careful!" Said Sage.
"I'll try" Answered Hadza.




Chapter 3: takes place with Hadza following Szary to his fighter.

"Ok, Hadza." Said Szary, "your fighter is in that door and on the landing spot across the floor. The fight is happening on the other side of the station, but watch out for soloers coming to the other side!"
"I'll be sure to" Said Hadza, "thanks Szary, i'll see you in a minute on the other side of the station. Good luck and good flying to you."
"And the same to you, Hadza." Said Szary.
Szary runs out of the hanger and towards his ship
Hadza hops in "The Rave" and starts the engine

"Ok, baby, do me good again." Said Hadza to his ship, "Lets do this!"
Hadza cranks up the music as always and takes off out the hanger. He flys straight out for a couple of seconds after exiting the hanger.
"Something sounds weird." Thought Hadza.
Just then two Apostacy fighters fly right over him.
"Shoot!" Said Hadza.
Hadza pulls off a U-turn at the same time as the two apostacy fighters. Hadza pulls the thruster backwards to let the apostacy fighters fly by.
"Alright! Here we go!" Said Hadza.
Hadza fires at the one on the left with standard lasers.
"I got him! Wait, the laser bounced right off." Said Hadza.
Hadza pushes a button to his right and it triggers his laser changer. he starts firing his Power Lasers on it and it breaks off one of its wings..
"Man, these shots would usually blow up a normal ship with one hit" Thought Hadza.
Hadza shoots it down with more power lasers. The other one does a backwards loop to end up behind Hadza
"Crap!!" Yelled Hadza, "Where'd he go?!"
Lasers start whipping by Hadza's Arwing. He gets hit by one but his shields just deflect it.
"Dang, I can't handle many of those!" Said Hadza.
Hadza starts flying up, down, left and right to dodge the lasers and does a good job. Hadza does a backwards loop. while in the process he gets hit with another laser. he starts firing wildly at the Apostacy ship until he takes it down.
Hadza radios the station

"Hello? Hadza, is that you?" Asked someone on the radio.
"Yeah, it's me." Answered Hadza, "I just got in a little skirmish and i am now heading to the other side of the station. I have something to report about these Apostacy ships. They have powered up shields. I have the lasers to put them down but I'm not sure about everyone else."
"Ok, this sounds serious! We will start getting the stations guns online. Thanks for this, Hadza." Said Sage.
"No problem, Sage." Said Hadza, "I'm arriving at the battle. I'll radio Szary, he should have the equipment to tell the rest of our fighters"
Hadza arrives at the battle scene and finds Szary.
"Hey, Hadza! What took you so long?" Asked Szary.
"Ran into some fighters on the other side." Answered Hadza, "I need you to radio all our fighters say this 'The Apostacy fighters are equiped with powered up Shields and lasers will deflect off of them until you wear down the shield after a few shots. Sage is getting the station's laser online. all we need to do is hold them off until they are online'"
"Will do." Said Szary.
Szary radios everyone telling them what to do.
Hadza decides to start locking down on some enemies

Ok, lets see what this baby can do!" Thought Hadza.
Hadza turns up his music and locks on to his first enemy. his fires at it taking off bith wings, sending it into a spiraling downfall until it blows up. he flys behind the next one and is about to fire at it when Szary flys down beside him and fires at it and kills it
"I'm your wingmate. We do this together!" Said Szary.
Hadza smiles and says "Well fair enough, lets make sure they dont get a chance to hurt the station!" Said Hadza, "Oh! how's your ship doing?"
"It's doing good. a few laser burns but it's fine." Answered Szary.
They both fly behind a fighter and lock onto it. Hadza fires first but misses do to being hit by a fighter behind him.
"Cover me Szary. im gonna stay on this guy." Said Hadza.
"Alright but you got the next one!" Said Szary.
"Deal." Said Hadza.
Szary pulls to the left while slowing down to let the fighter pass. when he is behind the fighter he starts firing at it. At the same time, Hadza takes down the one him and Szary were locked on to. Szary's laser are bouncing everywhere. the fighters shields go down and Szary's lasers start destroying the fighter.
"Szary? Do you read me?" Asked Sage over the radio.
"I read you loud and clear, go ahead." Answered Szary.
"Tell all the fighters to get out of there the lasers are reading" Said Sage.
"Will do. I'll get right on it." Said Szary.
"Oh! and Szary, you and Hadza stay behind to shoot down any fighters chasing our fighters." Said Sage.
"Ok, I'll send the message." Said Szary.
The message gets sent to all the fighters then Szary radios Hadza.
"Hadza, the fighters have been ordered to leave the battle. Me you have to stay behind and shoot down any ships that chase ours. the station's lasers are online. by my estimation we have 3 minutes to get out of here." Said Szary.
"Only 3 minutes?! Well, lets do it!" Said Hadza.
Hadza and Szary start with three fighters following an ally. they both lock-on to ones on the outside. Hadza shoots his down first with Szary not far behind. Neither of them stop firing, they just move over to the middle fighter and shoot it down. 2 Minutes and 5 seconds to go. Hadza and Szary seperate. Hadza goes to an ally being followed by two fighters. He starts firing at the one on the left first and takes it down easily. The second one does a couple of barrel roles and then is shot down. Hadza gets done with those two about the same time Szary gets to the other ones. there is about 1 minute left and they are still in range of the lasers. There are four more fighters following allies. Szary gets two of them down quick while Hadza has trouble with the other two. He gets down one in about 30 seconds but he can't seem to hit it. all of the sudden Szary comes from above to take it out.
"Didn't think I would let you down, did you?" Asked Szary.
"I was sure hoping you were on you way" Said Hadza.
Sirens start going off and they see the lasers guns start charging!
"Five Seconds and we are still in range!" Said Szary, "The fastest way out is to fly straight at the station and go under it."
"Whatever you say!" Said Hadza.
3....2....1....0! the lasers start firing straight at Hadza and Szary! They are flying straight at the station. Hadza does a barrel role to BARELY dodge a laser. Szary flys under one, then pulls up in a barrel role to go over another one. They finally make it back. It took about 30 seconds.
"Whew that was close!" Said Hadza.
"Thats was the closest i have ever been to dying!" Said Szary, "I hope i never have to that again!"
"Hey, Szary, look behind us. The lasers are tearing apart those fighters! Are we just that good of flyers or are they not trained?" Asked Hadza.
"They aren't trained at all! They are volunteer fighters. We will fight some generals in the next battle and they will be as good as you and me!" Answered Szary.
"Ok, well we need to get back see you there." Said Hadza.
"Alright." Said Szary.
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Looks good so far. You're right KR. I'm up to this point. I saw it on Universal and it looks like you didn't need to change much.

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Yeah i posted 7 chapters and i didn't want to post them all at once. mainly because the "50,000 character rule would have been broken" lol
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Chapter 4: Takes place with Hadza in Hanger 9 in his ship.

Hadza lands his ship and pushes a button to lift the cockpits opening.
"WHEW!" Yelled Hadza to the small crowd waiting for him, "Man! We had some close calls!"
"I'm just glad you are OK!" Said someone form the crowd.
"Yeah!" Said the crowd
Sage walks out of the crowd towards Hadza. she whispers in his ear.
"I need you and Szary in the Battle Tactic room." Said Sage.
"Ok. I'll find him and we will get there ASAP." Replied Hadza.
Sage walks off, out the hanger door and towards the Battle Tactic room.
"Ok everyone, I have to go. Thank you for all your support! we are gonna need it for the next battle!" Said Hadza to the crowd.
Hadza walks over to Szary
"Hey Hadza! What's up?" Asked Hadza.
"Sage needs to see us in the BTR." Answered Hadza in a whisper.
"What's this about?" Asked Szary.
"I don't know, but she sounded kinda worried." Answered Hadza.
"Oh, Ok. Lets get going then!" Said Szary.
They arrive at the BTR
"We're here." Said Hadza.
"Oh good. We have a problem." Said Sage.
"What is it?" Asked Szary.
"While you fighting a couple of ships flew to the other side of the station." Answered Sage.
"No problem! Hadza shot them down." Said Szary.
"No, not them. These were two fighters and a general. They were stealthed and we think they landed on the station somewhere." Said Sage.
"Wha...?! How can this happen?!" Asked Hadza in a worried/angry tone.
"We don't know for sure but we think they are somewhere on here. They are probably coming for us, as in You, Hadza, You, Szary, and me. We evacuated the leader as soon as we saw them. He is on his way to another Station we have in orbit." Said Sage.
"Are you sure he got there safely?" Asked Szary.
"We aren't sure yet. We told them to send a private message to me telling the exact location where he is." Said Sage.
"Ok. We will keep an eye out for these Apostacy members." Said Hadza.
"Ok. Oh, and Hadza we have moved your room closer to mine and Szary's." Said Sage.
"Ok. Thank you." Replied Hadza.
Hadza is now in his room watching a hologram on space fighting strategies.
"Where do you think she is?" Asked someone outside Hadza's room.
"I don't know, but why are we trying to find a GIRL?" Asked another voice.
"Shutup man! Listen to the boss!" Said another voice.
"Is that the Apostacy members?" Thought Hadza.
Hadza grabed his staff that resembles Krystal's and sneaks out of his room.
"Hey! What are you doing here?!" Yelled Hadza.
The three people turn around
"Who is this little fox?" Asked the general.
The general is about 7' 5" tall and is wearing all black. he has one mechanical eye that is colored red. he has a scar on the eye like Hadza's but on the opposite side.
"What...are you?" Asked Hadza.
"My name is Dashn and i am a Wolf." Answered Dashn.
"A wolf?! Funny, you don't look like a fox. Did something happen at child birth?" Said Hadza smirking.
"Your gonna eat those words!" Said Dashn really angrily.
"Good luck! Lets do this!" Said Hadza.
Dashn pulls out a beam sword and switches it on. Dashn throws the first swing. Hadza blocks it with ease.
"Huh? My beam sword didn't cut through your staff?!" Said Dashn confused.
Hadza swings in for an attack at Dashn's legs, but Dashn blocked it.
"Maybe I can let Dashn wear himself down." Thought Hadza.
Hadza decides to hold back and let Dashn swing at him with full force. Dashn does as Hadza had thought. Hadza blocks everything Dashn throws at him. Suddenly both of Dashn's body guards sprint behind Hadza. They are both holding beam swords. They both swing and Hadza ducks under their attacks then comes up and kicks Dashn in the chest forcing him back and to the ground. Hadza rolls backwards inbetween the two bodyguards right as they swing at him again. Hadza stands up and hits the one to his right across his temple killing him. The other one turns around and swings at Hadza. Hadza blocks it forcing the Beam sword out of his hand. Dashn Gets up and walks up behind his bodyguard and with his beam sword pointing towards Hadza. Hadza blocks a punch from the bodyguard and kicks him towards Dashn impaling the bodyguard on Dashn's beam sword.
"Nice," Said Dashn while getting his dead bodyguard off his sword, "But your gonna have to do better then that to beat me."
"Oh, that was just a taste of my real fighting skills!" Said Hadza.
Hadza goes back to his old strategy letting Dashn attack at full force only to have Hadza block it. This continues on for a few minutes then Dashn swings hard at Hadza and he blocks it making Dashn juggle his sword giving Hadza a chance to strike. Hadza jumps in the air towards Dashn and connects his foot right to Dashn's chest knocking Dashn back. Hadza pulls off a backflip off Dashn and lands on his feet. He dashes towards Dashn who is just getting his footing back. He slides across the floor and inbetween Dashn's legs stopping himself right behind him. Hadza stands up and slams his staff right across Dashn's temple killing him.
"That was tough, but it's done." Said Hadza hunched over on his knees.
Hadza walks into Sage's room with blood streaming down his face.
"I took care of our little problem." Said Hadza exaustedly.
"What? You killed the Apostacy members?" Asked Sage.
"Yeah. They said something about you and so I attacked them." Said Hadza.
"Wow. i have no hand-to-hand combat skills, so in a way you saved me." Said Sage.
"It's not a problem at all." Said Hadza still panting.
"Lets get you to a nurse and take care of the cut" Said Sage.
After they get back to Hadza's room.
"Hey, Hadza....Thank you for saving me." Said Sage.
"But I didn't save you" Said Hadza confused.
"Oh, but you did. They were coming for me." Said Sage.
"Well in that case, no problem." Said Hadza, "Ok, I need to get some rest."
"Ok. I will see you tommorrow." Said Sage.
Sage hugs Hadza compassionately and walks off
"Night..." Said Hadza stunned.
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Nice chapter, though I think you're moving a bit too fast =P
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man you dont even know whats gonna happen in the future. lol
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I didn't say I did, I just said I think you're advancing the story at a bit of a quick pace.
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