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Old 01-17-2010, 11:58 PM   #1
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Oh yea, time to spice this forum up with my poetry. I hope you all enjoy even though I'm very new to this forum.

Reason

We were all born for a reason,
Either positive or not,
Some of us Sparkle,
Some of us do not.

Even though we ain't all perfect,
We all have that one,
The one that will grasp your hand,
For better or not.

We were all born for a reason,
Either it be positive or not,
live freely,
And express your thought.

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Old 01-18-2010, 12:00 AM   #2
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Old 01-18-2010, 12:05 AM   #3
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Aww thank you : D that's so sweet.
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Old 01-18-2010, 04:26 AM   #4
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Lovely.

Looks like we've got a member here with some poetic talent.
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Old 01-18-2010, 02:52 PM   #5
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Lovely.

Looks like we've got a member here with some poetic talent.
Thanks! I've got many more too share with everyone. I just got to find my poetry journal.
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Old 01-18-2010, 04:27 PM   #6
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Thanks! I've got many more too share with everyone. I just got to find my poetry journal.
DO IT.

I'm not really good with critizing poetry or the like, but that was quite good. Great job. :3
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Thanks! I've got many more too share with everyone. I just got to find my poetry journal.

YOU HAVE ONE TOO.?!?
Jaja, I though my friend Samantha and I were the only ones!! Now there's 3! xD And I really like the first one, Raiken. It means something
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*wipes tear* JUS GEORGEOUS DAWWLING!!!!
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Old 01-18-2010, 07:11 PM   #9
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Thanks Everyone
Lol Rai xD
Btw here's another one!

Only A Nightmare
- Where the Boogeyman creeps
- Where the young boy leaps

- Its the zone where monster's lie
- Its the zone where victims die

- True Terror,
- But then again,
- Its only a nightmare.
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I suck at critiquing poetry, mainly because it's inherently subjective. It's a form of expression and I find it difficult to fault anyone's way of expressing themselves when it comes to this. I will say your poetry is easy to follow (which is good) and leaves little wiggle room for interpretation. Perfect for someone like me who would rather comprehend the meaning of a poem sooner than later.
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