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View Poll Results: Which is the best poem?
Rikanai 3 27.27%
Rai17 5 45.45%
Whiskermush 0 0%
Cindy 1 9.09%
Phil 2 18.18%
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Old 02-14-2010, 08:53 PM   #1
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Rikanai
Quote:
Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.

Rai17
Quote:
Crumbled papers
Of poems about you
Written with words
That will never come true

Written in ink
That won't fade away
The hopeful words
I wish I could say

Hands still shaking
As I continue to write
Scribbled letters
Of black and white

Eager to tell you
How I do feel
Wishing I could prove
My feelings are real...

Whiskermush
Quote:
Where do I place those special words?

Sitting at my desk
Pondering words in my mind
Love. Affection. Sweetheart.
How do I put such words in a letter?
She lives down the block
And she is sorta my type
But how can I put such words in a letter?

1...2....3....4...5...
Nope no good. That'll just go in the trash.
I should have figured
Expressions don't need to come from letters
As a rhythm doesn't always match a poem
Then, how do I put such words in a sentence?
Maybe it'll stumble upon me
Just that one special day
The day of you and me

Cindy
Quote:
I had a dream last night.
It was about you.
I thought these feelings I felt where gone, through and through.

I was terribly wrong.
I woke up crying, with a pain in my chest...
I can't even rest at my very best.
I just lie there in thoughts of you and all those moments when time just flew.


I thought we would still be friends but I was once again wrong, and now you're gone...

Phil
Quote:
I am invisible
peacefully ignored
sometimes amused
mostly just bored

I am lucky
and without misfortune
because of anyone i could meet
I've met the best one

I am a witness
I've seen, I know
that what happens between us
is out of my control

I am a victim
of Cupid's mighty wrath
I'm under his spell
just how long will this last?
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Old 02-14-2010, 10:41 PM   #2
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Couldn't anyone do one that wasn't so predictably structured?

Eh, forget it. Anyways, I like Cindy's the best. It would seem to have the most emotion IMO.
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It would seem to have the most emotion IMO.
It probably does :/
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Hence my decision. Yours wasn't bad, but...eh, idk.
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Old 02-14-2010, 11:13 PM   #5
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Rai takes my vote. I like the steady and consistent rhythm and the rhyme scheme isn't bad either.
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Old 02-15-2010, 01:41 AM   #6
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You are aware poems don't have to rhyme every other line right? There are some very abstract poetic styles out there. Try some.
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You are aware poems don't have to rhyme every other line right? There are some very abstract poetic styles out there. Try some.
Abstract styles are just plain goofy if you don't use them correctly, and sound terrible if you don't match them up just right. Beautiful as they are, they are just the opposite in the wrong hands. And trust me, I know. One of my friends isn't exactly skilled in poetry, and let me tell you, his rhyme scheme was wayyyy too abstract o_o
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