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Old 07-30-2010, 11:22 AM   #1
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Building a box

Building a box

She wanted to give him something special
Something about her
So she decided to build a box
Even though she didn’t know how
She gave what she got to make it perfect


People throughout the process brought her down
Saying she’s just wasting her time
And that the box would just shatter
Only a few close friends gave her hope


Even though she was hurting herself with the nails
She still continued, thinking it would heal when she’d give it to him
Her hands were filled with blood
But that didn’t matter to her


Spending months to work on it
Trying to fix the cracks caused by ignorance
That little box, meant everything to her
It was her source of joy
But also her biggest pain


Finally done
She tries to finally give it to him
He ignores her and evades her
Just like that out of the blue
With no peculiar reason


But she still tries to give him the box
She had put something really special into it
Something you can’t give to anyone
Her heart


She finally gets to give it to him
He takes it, Smiles
And crushes it before her eyes
Tears flow down her cheek


He looks at her
Takes her hand
And puts the nails in it
Still with that same smile
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Old 07-30-2010, 02:23 PM   #2
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Old 07-30-2010, 11:42 PM   #3
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