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Old 11-06-2010, 08:50 PM   #1
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Once upon a time there was a dude called Jake, he was a nice guy, young, handsome, usually looked around nintendo fan forum and played wii and gamecube.

But on the weekends he likes to hang around with friends in town, but to do that he needs to pay for the bus. One day hes getting ready to go out and his dad goes "Hey man, why dont you borrow my bus and train pass, you can get the bus for free!", "thanks mate" young Jake says, as he frolocks out the door to the bus station.

He gets the bus for free and has a fantastic time with his friends, and even picks up Metroid 3 for wii for only $20!

He waits for the bus to get back home after a sweet day, but his dad pulls up because he was going to the shops and offers him a ride home, "sweet!" Jake sais thankfully.

On arrival home Jakes dad says "hey can i have my pass back?", "sure" Jake says, as he reaches into his wallet, only to reveal that hes lost the pass. "#*$@$!" Jake rages, "Iv lost your bloody pass", "Those are $165 a month, better get me a new one" Jake is in deep depression and rage, he only has $205 and had to spend over half on a bus pass, he buys his dad one, and resorts to the Nintendo Fan Forum to spread the story of rage he has to bestow.

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Couldn't you go back to the game store and ask if anyone has seen it? That would have been the only time you used your wallet after the bus.
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Couldn't you go back to the game store and ask if anyone has seen it? That would have been the only time you used your wallet after the bus.
lol i was goign to recomend the same ^^. and this isn't creative writting. isn't it???
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