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Old 01-31-2011, 11:43 PM   #1
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Remember

Just a poem I wrote about a game:

I remembered you last night
But all that seems to fade away
With passing time you become a dream
While in my head the timer ticks

Why should we part?
You are always in my heart
But when this episode
Draws to a close
I will be reminded

I replayed things as real as the first
And what has happened has become again
But who is this? And what's going on?
I don't feel that you are who you used to be

Chorus

Don't worry about me- I'm right where I was
Trying to find you in a fog that gets darker
When all is said and done, I'll awaken
Not knowing where I am, but knowing I need to find you

Chorus

Your drawings that I see on the walls
Are the dreams and thoughts of someone else
The things their eyes see in me
Are what I remember seeing in you

Chorus

As I now sleep I will forget you
But I will not forget the things you remember
I will forget who you are and what you have done
I will only remember to find you



You know what? I'll make it interesting: First person to name the game I describe in the poem gets to see the next chapter of my book, Super Nintendo, before I post it. Next chapter is a fight scene, by the way.
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Are the dreams and thoughts of someone else"

This sounds eerily reminiscent of Namine from Kingdom Hearts, so on a limb I cry out that the game is Kingdom Hearts II.

I am prepared to be wrong, though.
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Old 02-21-2011, 09:49 AM   #3
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Close. It's Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories
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you just told everyone, so now you've ruined your competition before any one else could guess ...
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didn't really matter. He was close enough to get it and no one else was guessing
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You do! I'll PM it to you when I finish it.
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