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Old 03-16-2011, 06:17 PM   #1
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Devastating nightmare

Devastating nightmare

by: Admiral Aka Magic

I’m waking up in a bed not knowing where I was. I see a nurse walking in she asks “Hey, I see that you’re awake, are you okay?”

“What’s going on, where am I?” I ask, “You’re in the state hospital, sir.” I realize that I can’t move my legs at all.

“Nurse, why can’t I move my legs!?” I started to panic, and then the nurse tells me, “Please, you need to calm down sir, everything will be alright.

Wait here while I go get your doctor.” As she leaves I’m trying to remember what the hell happened and why I ended up in a hospital bed. “Good god, what the living hell is going on?”

I see the doctor walk in. “Hello sir, my name is Dr. Sweetboots.” I looked at him for a second and couldn’t take his name seriously, I wanted to laugh but I couldn’t.

“Sir, I am here to tell you what happen the other day; you’ve been asleep for a good two days.” I ask him “Please tell me what happen I’m pretty sure I can take it.”

The doctor took a deep breath and proceeded to tell me “You’ve been in a accident and are paralyzed from the waist down.

At this point, I am devastated and don’t know what else to do.” I say to my self, “Is this really it? What the hell am I going to do?” I grabbed the bed sheets and started to bellow and groan.

The doctor says “I’m terribly sorry that had to happen, I tried everything I could.” I began to cry, letting all my emotions flow.

“My dreams are crumbled; I will never be the dancer.... I always wanted to be, ..My life will never be the same.”

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!



Note: please let me know if their are any missspelled words or whatever. I made this story up from the top of my head there will be more i have i completed but i left the rest of the story on my school computer so i have to wait til spring break is over.
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Old 03-16-2011, 06:38 PM   #2
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Wow!!!!.....just wow!!!! I thought it was real dude!!!!
Nice tell me when part two comes out!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!
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Dr. sweetboots........lol
poor guy. Once i read a book with a similar accident (I was forced to read the book)
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