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Old 04-12-2011, 12:33 PM   #1
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I put this in my blog, but I'm pretty sure it would fit here too... and probably get more views lol. Anyway, here's a comic I'm working on. Tell me what you think of the first one. It's kinda small here, so you may have to open it in a new window.

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Old 04-12-2011, 04:18 PM   #2
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lol. The blocky terrain looks a bit bland, though.
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I think, if at all possible, you should make the characters bigger, possibly giving them emotion through body gestures and such.

For the first comic, the joke was fairly well done. Just keep working on the humor and such, and I think you'll have a dandy on your hands.
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lol. The blocky terrain looks a bit bland, though.
I used the actual sprite terrains of FFTA and FFTA2, that's why it looks so blocky, but I'm pretty sure I could smooth out the edges a little more. Thanks for that.

and Glaston, The sprites and terrain are all sized accordingly, so making just the characters bigger might not work. What if I doubled the size of everything? or would it end up too big?
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I've got a team of people working on this now (a designer, a flash animator, and a pixel/panel artist [me]) and we have the first 4 done. We just need a place to post them that doesn't try to resize them (Which is why the first one looks bad). Any ideas?
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